These three storyboards are our final version of the events that will occur in our music video.
This is a much more detailed version than our rough storyboard.
This is an overview of the three storyboards.
Sheet 1
Sheet 2
Sheet 3
Sheet 4
In the first scene as in our rough storyboard there is either a jukebox or iPod of which a person presses play on it and the song begins. The camera then pans around the pub to the group of friends.
We are hoping that this will give the audience a decent introduction before the music starts, and we also like the effect of the external music starting as someone in the video presses play, we believe this would give off a good effect on the audience.
A mid shot ensues of the three friends sat at the bar slightly slumped over drinking.
We believe this gives a strong, confident beginning to the music video as it shows who is starring in it and what they are up to, just before the music starts.
This then leads on to a close up of either of Simon's 'friends' changing the song, or possibly one of the tempter's as a show of targeting by the two tempters possibly.
We think that this would make quite an impact on the audience as the tempters take a firm role in the beginning of the video.
Simon then turns around to see a close up of the temper's face staring at him, this is the transformation from Simon's 'friends' to the tempters.
This leads on to a fixed over-the-shoulder shot of the tempters walking towards Simon, the two tempters walk slowly but synchronised with each other's movements.
Close up of Simon's face in a shocked/horror expression showing fear and surprise.
This is yet another still shot.
The next scene sees Simon's 'friends' appear out of nowhere and as if nothing has happened and jokingly drag Simon away who is still looking over his shoulder at the two tempters who from Simon's point of view still appear to be there. This is a long/mid shot which tracks the three character's movements for a short time.
Simon is walking down the street with his other two 'friends' still looking shocked with a hint of fear and possilby being paranoid and looks over his shoulder a couple of times.
As Simon looks forwards from looking over his shoulder he sees the two tempter's walking around the corner from where Simon and his friends are headed, this is a mid to long shot and is from Simon's POV.
A close up ensues of the two tempters tilting their head sideways at Simon, this is a fixed shot and is almost as if they are tilting their heads sideways in recognition.
Simon then tries to grab his friend's attention and points towards where the tempters are standing and as his friends look over there is nothing there and they carry on walking.
This is a mid and tracking shot.
(Possibly try a camera technique where instead of cutting to the friend's POv the camera swiftly strafes to the position indicated).
A fixed mid shot is then made as the three friends walk into a party, this is shot as if they are being watched from the tempter's point of view.
A simple short scene of the camera panning to the three friends sat on a sofa listening to the dance music and enjoying themselves, Simon partially forgotten about the tempters.
A close up is followed on of Simon's face as he is laughing and smiling, which then switched to a POV shot from Simon looking at one of his friends that has been replaced by a tempter, who looks to pass a bottle of alcohol to Simon.
A midshot of Simon quickly standing up, shock evident on his face again as his stares at the tempter, he turns around and runs out the door with the camera tracking him from a fixed position.
A long shot follows, as if someone is watching his from across the road he runs out on to, as he bends over slightly to catch his breath, this also presents a manner of enigma to the audience of who might be watching him from across the road.
Camera cuts to a close up/side view of Simon's face as he is still catching his breath, with a tempter standing in the background staring at Simon who slowly looks up and screams.
There are then a couple of scenes which track and pan around the tempters doing various things e.g. pouring alcohol over their faces, fighting each other in slow motion, this is done for effect and for tension, most likely played in the song's chorus.
This cuts to a long/mid shot of Simon on his knees looking very rough (e.g. three days of beard growth, unshaved, ragged clothes, bags under his eyes etc.) screaming at the two tempters who are slowly walking towards him until they block Simon out from the audience's view, this then fades to black.
The ends scene starts out relatively similar to where the video started, but in this case Simon is slumped over a bar alone, face down in spilt alcohol, which then fades to black leaving the audience unsure of whether he is dead or not.
The first scene on this picture is one we have decided not to use, but it is one of the tempter's mouthing some of the lyrics of the chorus of the song, however we decided not to use this scene as we believe this would have compromised some of the anonymity of the tempters's character.
The second scene shows Simon walking to a train station, however the audience is unsure of why he is doing this, as he walks along he is also plagued by the tempter's constant appearances.
The first scene in this picture shows Simon walking up to the edge of the platform, this gives a vague idea to the audience of the certain type of actions that Simon is going to use, this will also be shot as a side shot in an attempt to show the shadows of his face, and to make him look even more rough.
The second scene in this picture is of the two tempters standing on the platform adjacent to Simon nodding their heads at them, in a way confirming to the audience of Simon's intentions.
The first scene in this picture shows another side shot of Simon on the train platform, but with a train traveling towards him in the background, this strengthens the confirmation of Simon's intentions for the audience, in order to create a solid understanding of what is going to happen.
The second scene in this picture shows Simon walking on to the tracks as the train is coming towards him, this gives us a near final scene and allows the audience to imagine how Simon will meet a brutal end.
The first scene shows Simon walking into the middle of the tracks, as the second scene cuts to his face, looking at the camera, as he slowly closes his eyes, this then fades to black as the sound of a speeding train comes to the audiences attention, thus ending the music and the video.
This is the complete version of our final storyboard consisting of three sheets, these were some of our best ideas and some yet may be cut out depending on how long each individual scene is.
Also depending on the length this entire video comes to we may add in some few extra ideas.
We have created this because it allows us to put all of our good and considered ideas into one place, and also allows for us to add in the finer details of the video as well as adding on other little scenes that we may have firstly left out.