Student Feedback

During the course of today I completed a final version of my music video.
This was shown to our class as part of peer assessment and feedback from the rest of the class as to what I could do to further improve my video, as well as what some of the better features of my music video was.
Overall I am satisfied with the outcome of my music video, and although there are some elements of it that could be done to improve it they are small details within the video.
Specifically, what I could have done better in the video and what one of the points of improvement are is to try and reinforce the entire picture of the upper class/lower class tempter idea by using more scenes where they offer Simon luxury goods of richer and poorer quality, unfortunately due to lack of time and arrangement we were unable to complete these scenes and are using what footage we have.
Furthermore, one good point of my music video that the class believes I have conducted well on is shots and transitions, as parts of my music video vary between reality and imagination, and they believe that I have brought that idea across to the audience well.