Magazine Advert Ideas and Draft Feedback

Today we gathered as a class and gave constructive feedback on each other's drafts for our magazine advert, including ways to improve and features which make the drafts good.

Overall the class gave good feedback to our draft ideas, with draft number 2 showing a good eye catching picture in the middle which would make audiences stop and look, draft number 1 also had positive feedback as it shows more brand identity and links back to the Digipak more than number 2, and number 3 received the most negative feedback as it was a similar idea to number 2, but the picture in then middle was seen as less eye catching.

Out of the three draft ideas we came up with, idea number 2 was most popular with idea number 1 coming close up.

Idea number 1 is of Lewis's Digipak background, where it is a Guy Fawkes mask surrounded by falling joker cards against a black background.














Idea number 2 is of a shattered mirror/window with the reflection of the two tempters in the window/mirror, with a large and prominent title.

















Idea number 3 is similar to idea number two, but instead takes place in a train station which we filmed in, with the tracks clearly being seen, and broken glass on the floor through which one of the tempter's reflections can be seen, with yet again another large prominent title.

The magazine advert draft that I will be working off of is advert draft number 2.